2015年1月20日 星期二

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5. People like to choose one from green vegetables, Chinese cabbages, Chinese chires or celeries, and put into the dumplings.

6. You might think it will be very salty,but it isn't actually. Surprisedly, it is a little bit sweet.

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  1. Good start -- a few things to work on more:

    5. People like to choose one from green vegetables, Chinese cabbages, Chinese chires or celeries, and put into the dumplings. PEOPLE LIKE TO CHOOSE A GREEN VEGETABLE TO PUT INTO THE DUMPLINGS, EITHER CHINESE CABBAGE, CHINES CHIVES, OR CELERY.

    6. You might think it will be very salty,but it isn't actually. Surprisedly, it is a little bit sweet. USE SURPRISINGLY INSTEAD OF SURPRISEDLY (not a word).

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