Grade for my food

After compare my essay to the TOEFL rubric, I think I might get a 3 on my writing. The reason why I will say that is because I am confident with my introduction this time. I have a interesting hook at the beginning and a pretty well thesis at the end of the intro. Then I provide 4 evidences to tell the reader the information about the food and the meaning to me. Pretty strong and descriptive language in the body paragraph. At the end, I conclude all the information that I wrote in the body paragraph and use a closer to end this essay.