You know what I mean (revision)

On Friday afternoon, Andy was sitting in the common room and watching TV. Soon, Jason came in and sat next to Andy.

He asked "How is your day, bro?"

Andy answered "Pretty good, I just finished my Chemistry test."
Jason "Really? Then you can enjoy your weekend I guess."
Andy "Yea, but I still have something need to do over the weekend."
Jason "Like?"
Andy "Some college stuff."

"Oh! Talk about college, how is your application going on?"

"Well, I don't really want to talk about college right now."
Jason remember yesterday was the day that the result for college early decision came out. Then from Andy's face he can feel a touch of sadness. He thoughts maybe Andy didn't accept by his dream college, and that was the reasson why he didn't want to talk about it.
Jason said “It will be fine, everything will overcome.”

Andy ”I know, but I just don’t know why it will happen."

"Well, it is just an early decision, nothing matter about it. By the way, it doesn't mean you didn't have any chances."

"I know, but I’m sure I check everything before I send my application. Everything should be perfect, but….”

“Well, you can’t change anything right now, I suggest you to look forward. When God closes a door, he always opens a window.”

“I think you are right, I shouldn't keep being negative.”

"Yea, this is the real Andy I know."

"Thank you Jason, you did help me a lot."

"No problem, this is my job for being your friends. Anyway, I didn't accept by my Dream college too."

"You didn't get accept in?"

Jason asked confusly ”Wait, didn't you say you get reject?”

"Who told you that, I got accept by Boston University. They just want me to send a new photo to them in order to make my student ID card, because last one I sent was awfal and they want me to give them before the end of today."

After Jason heard that, he went back to his room and felt very disappointed rest of the day.

You know what I mean!

Have you ever been through a stituation that while you are talking about something, but your friends are answer with a totally different thing. It is possible to happen and you might even didn’t notice until both of you told each other what you are talking about. The story below is actually having the situation I just said, let us see how interesting it is and how is it still make sence to each other.

Andy and Jason are high school boarding students. Andy was sitting in the common room and watching TV. Then Jason came in and said "How is your day, bro?"
Andy answered "Pretty good, I just have my Chemistry test done."
Jason "Really? Then you can enjoy your weekend I guess."
Andy "Yea, but I still have something need to do."
Jason "Like?"
Andy "College...I don't really want to talk about this right now."
Jason remember that yesterday was the day that the result for college early decision will came out. Then from Andy's tone, he thinks maybe Andy didn't accept by his dream college.
Jason said “It will be fine, it doesn’t mean you don’t have chance.”

Andy ”I know, but I just don’t know why it will happen. I’m sure I check everything before I send my application and everything is perfect, but….”

“Well, you can’t change anything right now, the only thing I suggest to you is look forward. When God closes a door he always opens a window.”

“I think you are right, I should just take a new photo right now!”

Jason confus asked ”Wait, take a photo?”

Andy answer ”Yes, I think the photo I send through the application is awful. I almost think the college won’t accept me just because the photo, but I’m glad I still accept by BU.”

Jason think in his mind”OMG! I can’t believe I misunderstood the idea whole time, but he still can response my idea even though we are talking different thing."

“I’m glad you get accept, maybe we should order pizza to celebrate.” said by Jason

“I think that will be a good idea, because I’m so hungry right now!”

First paragraph

Andy was sitting in the common room and watching TV. Then Jason came in and said "How is your day, bro?"

Andy answered "Pretty good, I just have my test done."

Jason "Really? Then you can enjoy your weekend I guess."

Andy "Yea, but I still have something need to do."

Jason "Like?"

Andy "College...I don't really want to talk about this right now."

Jason remember that yesterday was the day that the result for early decision for college will came out. Then from Andy's tone, he think Andy didn't got into his dream college.

If I am Charlie Brown

The most interesting character I like in the video is Charlie Brown. The Eason why I like him is because he use a lot of "If I" and "I should" in his writing. I think this is a repetition, because he repeat this same word over and over again. However, I didn't feel any tired about his writing. Even more I think it is very interesting because this will make the audience remember what he said. He also use solution or what he think will happen after he use "If I" and "I should". It make the writing become more smooth  and having connection between each sentence. These are the reason why I think Charlie Brown is the most interesting person in this video.

Revise for peer

5. People like to choose one from green vegetables, Chinese cabbages, Chinese chires or celeries, and put into the dumplings.

6. You might think it will be very salty,but it isn't actually. Surprisedly, it is a little bit sweet.

How to write?

Those two paragraph are talking about how to write good writing. Each of them are wrote by same author but telling different idea. One is talking about the 13 rules that one writer should follow when the write. Another one is talking about some idea you can think about while you write. For the 13 ways of writing, it told people that there is nothing right or wrong on writing. You can did whatever or however you want because you are the author. People won't care about whether your writing are strange or disagree with their thought. As long you are the author, no one will say anything about your writing. 

Another writing is talk about what is a good writing and a good writing is like something else. To write a good writing is not a difficult thing, it didn't require fantastic grammar or miracle vocabulary. A good writing can be very simple, brief to the point. It didn't need to be a long essay or multiple evidences to support your idea. Writing a good writing can be similar to doing something else. For example, it said good writing is like math or good teaching...etc. This mean write a good writing is not difficult, but it is base on whether you think it is a good writing or not.

Both are them for me are very useful because I am one type of person that didn't think a lot before or while I am writing. These two article did give me a lot of idea about writing, such as a good writing didn't nessecery have to include tons off evidences. To write a good writing only need the author think they are writing a master piece every time when they write. This is why right now I will think more about the writing before I actually write it. It will help my writing become more organized and more smooth.  

Grade for my food

After compare my essay to the TOEFL rubric, I think I might get a 3 on my writing. The reason why I will say that is because I am confident with my introduction this time. I have a interesting hook at the beginning and a pretty well thesis at the end of the intro. Then I provide 4 evidences to tell the reader the information about the food and the meaning to me. Pretty strong and descriptive language in the body paragraph. At the end, I conclude all the information that I wrote in the body paragraph and use a closer to end this essay.