2015年3月30日 星期一

Brainstorms for persuasive essay

Exercise is very important for teenagers 
It required people to do exercise 
Less obesity problem
Growth better
Instead of playing computer game, do more outdoor activities 
Strong body 
Having more experience about new sport
Making new friends
Learning leadership and teamwork
Having enough relaxations instead of learning pressure
Healthy life
Get more focus on one thing


1. Is it necessary for a teenager having enough exercise time?
2. What are the advantage about having requirement sport time?
3 what if somebody didn't like it?
4 why there are only one type of sport in one season?(can't basketball in all season?)
5 should the requirements sport time be flexible?


There should participate three season activities. However, they should have the flexibility to decide their practice time for each day.(time commitment)
- exercise is important for teenager
- learning new things(leadership, teamwork, change one personality)
- find new hobby
- they could manage their schedule in order to get balance between school work and sport


Students at Cheshire academy should participate three season activities, but they should have the flexibility to decide their activities time in order to get balance on their school work and externality. With good reason.(good excuse) specific exception. 

Third paragraph- how to make the situation become not that awkward and disrespectful (like write the form) guild line for the situation. 

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