Idea for my portfolio

The five blog post I'm going to use are:

-Bon appetite

-Bonjour! Je m'appele Gordon 

-A Bientot 

-Fighting

-See you again

The reason why I chooses these blog posts not only because they have less grammar errors than other, but all of these posts are meaningful for my challenge. After I read all of these blog posts, I come up with some idea about how should I revise my blog posts. The first thing I am going to look on is make sure there is no grammar error. After I done with that part, I will continued to work on my word choice. One major problem I found out from my blog post is that some of the words I use are not really effective. Due to my blog posts are more like a lesson, so it seems like i use a lot of simple word and make my posts become less attractive. That is why word choice will be one of the changes I'm going to focus on. Last but not least, the sentence sturcure. In my writing, I realized that whenever I have an idea, I will just keep writing and forget to stop. This make my blog posts looks like a note but not a post, so I would like to change some of my sentences structure in order to make the paragraph smooth and perfect. These three are the major problems I want to change while I working on my portfolio, but this is just a blue print for now. Because I might found out more mistakes that I could change in order my portfolio become better!