OMG! It is so hard!

This is my first time to wrote an article that I learn from my past. I think it is very interesting because this paper not only tell people what I had learn from the past, but also help me to think of all the events that happen around me. However, there are some place that bother me when I wrote this paper.

The biggest one is the grammar problem. I know how to make my paper become no grammar mistake, but I always forget to do that. I will just keep writing and writing and didn’t notice that I already did many grammar mistake. This paper is very different than other paper that we had done before, this one we get like almost two weeks to work on it. This help me a lot because I can let my teacher or peers to look on my paper and told me did I did any grammar mistake on it. This did really improve my gramma problem a lot.

Grammar mistake is just one of the problem that I have when I wrote my paper. Thinking of what am I going to write is also one of the problem. I am 17 years old right now, not too big but also not too small. There did a lot of different things happen around me, but I don’t know how to relate those things to what I have learn from that. Like I know I be in trouble or I got punish by my parents, but all of those things are just not important or something that people should not do. Such as lie or skip the class...etc. I really can not think of any big event that make the gordon today. After one minutes thinking, I finally have some idea about what can I wrote about. I found out that I can wrote about first time performance, first time aboard study, and first time fail my test. These three are the most important events that affect me recently, each of them did teach some kind of idea that I can learn from.

Now I have done what am I going to write and the grammar mistake that I made so far, but new problems always came: Revision. Like what I said, this paper is different than the other we have done before. We have more time to revise on this one, which mean we will edit it more time. Everytime when we revise it, we will correct the old mistake that I have made. However, the new mistake came out, it might grammar mistakes or it chould be the structure of the essay wrong. This cause me can not correct every single mistake that I made in my paper, which did bother me a lot. After few times, I found out that I should revise my paper while someone else is around me. Then when I make any mistake on my paper, they can just point it out and tell me to fix it. Surprisingly, the number of mistakes that I made on my paper did decrease, and make my paper become more perfect.